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topic posted Wed, June 22, 2005 - 10:57 AM by  Daniel
i was listening to some low-key industrial last night and started to freestyle under my breath. this is the transcription of what i came up with, so i hope you guys enjoy it.
the beat is pretty damn simple and basic, as is the rhyme and rhythm, but it is still pretty smooth and gets the point across.

circumnavigating the extremeties
has led us to growing insanaties
in those little corn row hedge row
differences that glow that burn and flow
between veins and muscle tissue
like some fathomless leagueless sensation
an elephant pulling us from the issue
to another preacher annotating proclamation
"ignorance leads to unseen disease,
the flesh burns and stings and dear God, please,
curse those heathen-suffer those cretins
destroy these meager taste these neither
here I stand, or there I plan, dear God, please
forgive the ingnorant and their lushious disease"
until we clone-fed stomp our feet till blood pours
between pews ankles and castrated sores
our muscles flash to rubber and pits stink
but we are together, we are together, we think
we are together, we fall together in a single blink
it all comes crashing down
from hill to ant-lead town
pulses begin to waver
and all he thinks is "dear god, save her,
save her breath and save her soul,
kill her curse and i shall sin no more"
trusting ourselves to our levity
brings us closer and closer to our sanity
parceled leverage in tiny stacks and columns
retrofitted with brass silver and mocking solemn
jeers that echo echo echo echo
and say "let go let go let go let go"
just another three card monte
to turn our backs and flaunt it, flaunt thee
to the long-dead gods wondering
"thus thy day has come, ye wandering bastion
of complexity y complexion. take un hand,
take un land, take un clan and take un sand,
destroy thy neighbors and fuck thy brothers and
curse thy favors in exchange for heavenly labours"
and we bow our heads, a sign of acceptance
drowning in history, false and accepted
stuck between pages of ink blessed in gold
blessed in red blessed in red blessed in gold,
we bless we bless we age and we crawl
under the beams so high
waiting for the time to cry
pulses begin to waver
and all he thinks is "dear god, save her,
save her fire and save her grace,
kill her entire, ageless, porcelain face"
posted by:
Daniel
Los Angeles
  • Re: new

    Fri, July 8, 2005 - 7:47 PM
    nice nice nice !!

    to continue
    this preacher's menu
    We've been having the talent
    so now we got the venu

    disease and death
    are easy
    compared to sin
    eating one up within
    that's why
    every moment is like a last breath

    heathens
    are in no more need to be saved
    than reasons
    or should I have said
    excuses
    useless
    to fight when it's not right yourself
    pointing fingers at your own reflection

    you wanna see something funny?
    look in the mirror
    haha talking to myself again
    don't be tricked into thinking I'm forgiven-

    as long as we get past the justifications
    maybe we'll wake up in the morning
    and our sin will be expelled in our snoring
    • Re: new

      Tue, November 8, 2005 - 11:51 AM
      this reply is long overdue

      we link accoustic with innocence and claim sarcasm IS wit
      a branded national movement
      as a pedophile bowel movement
      only less so and no ebb to
      flow
      nicknamed n crosstrained as
      Motion of Perpetual Ocean.
      some sort of cranium leak, not CIA, see ID leak
      but cranium leak, not FBI, eye to eye, toe to toe leak
      but cranium leak
      startled to freak sputtering as speak-
      easy whispers underhanded, multi-planned
      and slipped inside white envelopes between
      Asian Horiscopes, dragon tears, horror IS pope,
      passed under the table as the miniscule fable
      front the back learnt as SMACK TALK
      not smack
      CRACK PIPE
      not crack head fed till dead
      out miniscule fable of casual seasonal offerings
      points to plot and seems to be thickening,
      ravaging,
      to draw attention away from podiums towards the motor home
      sect, effect, felt yet AS stability
      named: Media Massacre,
      coined as sir sired in typical biblical sodomite fire.
      and
      and
      and
      They are soaked in sodium as sweat, guilty yet high
      high as motherfucking kites stuck, bad luck
      as they eat sweat for breath and each went as said
      Capitol-Ize and De-Moral-Ize breath as sweat
      as S-E-X and modern oed
      as R-E-X immobilized.
      Generalized. Picked as prized, glazed-over eyes hidden behind hidden eyes and structured sutured eyes and I, I, I's
      and We, We, We sue, their baby blues as cheese wheels
      as circus feels like a horror flick
      love-ly move-ee trick
      and we sue.
      only less so and whispered low, low, low
      and lower still.

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